Where Are You?

She cant understand where it has gone. It simply vanished in thin air. She looks and looks but still nothing. Can she find it...?

Oh mittens
Where have you gone
I cannot find you anywhere
I have looked
And looked
But still nothing
You're not...
In between the coach cushions
Or under the bed
Not even in the dark monstrous closet
Oh mittens how I miss you
My hands are so cold
They need your warmth
Oh mittens please come out
And stop hiding from me
Please oh please oh please
I begged and begged and begged
But still...
Nothing
I started to pace around the room
Wondering where my mittens could be
I tried to think...
Where was the last place I saw you
But nothing seemed to come to mind
I couldn't take this anymore
And I was beginning to get frustrated
Just before all hell broke loose
It came to me
The freezer
I hurried to the freezer
And opened it quickly
There covered in ice
Were my mittens
After hours of searching
I finally found them
My once lost mittens
Where now found
And I was happy as can be!

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy this write. Please tell me what you think of it! I do hope you enjoy it. It kinda seems more like a story than a poem! What do you think? Do you think I should turn it into a story type or is this good too! Please do tell me what you think! Please!!!!! Thanks

Manda :o)

Reviews

[bellboy]

random much nice poem a few grammatical mistakes but other wise good poem in general, it flows really well gotta love it

[Destinee]

this is super cute, innocent, flow-y and free, awesome write :)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

this was cute (=
i love the way you write about the most random of subjects lol
i really enjoyed the read request (:

[Wolfe Greytome]

I LOVE the sheer randomness of your topics. And other than a couple of word tense issues (e.g. "I started to paced...") the writing was excellent.

[black.butterfly]

I like how this poem flows! I loved it.

[Scarlet Pulse]

Hey Manda. I love that your topics, what you decide to write about is so diverse. There are sooo many different things, and this poem just shows exactly what I'm talking about. I prefer reading poems over short stories, although some short stories are great. I can definitely recommend a couple. So the topic of your poem is very cute. There are some spelling errors, not known if done purposely, and I thought it was written well. I would try to say things, but without directly saying them. Maybe you can make it like a hide and seek game, or give hints and clues to where your mittens could be. It was already fun to read, but maybe it would make it even more enjoyable . Here to help if you need. Good job!

[PaperHearts]

This was really sweet! I liked how innocent and light this poem was, and thought that the ending was really humorous. I personally liked how it was a poem, because I think that it matched the character's scattered and frantic thought process. A very clever, easy read. :)
~PaperHearts

[Sseoni]

Ha ha! What a cute and funny poem! I really liked it! It was a very enjoyable poem and I really enjoyed reading it! :D

[deeps]

This is kind of comical and wonderful really. An enjoyable read here.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Hehe, this is very sweet and comical.... Really cute. Well done!