Goodbyes Hurt

She is lost without him. Ever since he left... Nothings been the same. Here life lost... with no hope at all.

Goodbye
That was the last thing he said to me
I watched him drive away
In the winter's snow 
Tears started to fall down my red cheeks
But they would quickly turn to ice
When I wiped my crystal tears away
And looked up
He was gone
As I started to walk home
I started to ponder
I never knew how much words hurt
Especially goodbye
I didn't want this
I didn't want him gone
Or him to leave
I knew this would happen eventually
But never so soon
We promised each other
That we would always be together
We were so happy
And in love
And everybody knew it
.....
Days past
And days turned into weeks
And then months
I missed him
I cant sleep
I cant think
All my dreams
All those happy dreams I once had
Became nightmares
I am frightened
I dont talk to anybody
But myself
......
I never knew...
Never ever knew
That goodbye
Hurts so damn bad

Author's Note

I know I can add more. But its just too long. I mite need to create a short story to make the full effect. But know I tried to do my best. I don't have time to create a full story right now...but I will try. Hope you enjoy it. Please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[deeps]

Goodbyes are the worst because of the word "Good" there is no good goodbye!
least I never heard of one. I like your feelings you put into this.

[funeralmoon]

great piece of writing, you convey your pain so well. this is a topic i know all too well.
sorry for your pain but out of pain comes inspiration.
Moon