We'll Always Be Together

A boy and a girl are so in love, but the boy is forced to move away leaving everything behind. As they spend their last days together, loving as much they can, he tells her everything will be ok.

The words he kept telling me ran through my mind

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Dont cry baby

Everything will be alright

Im right here

Im not going anywhere right now

We dont have to say goodbye tonight

So relax

Just lay yourself on me

Take a deep breathe

And close your eyes

Just remember that I will always be here

All you have to do is close your eyes

And think of me

There I will appear

.....

I would lay there with him

My face hidden in his chest

His shirt wet from my tears

I could feel his fingers

Running through my long blond hair

I was so sad...

He was leaving me soon

Moving south

Leaving everything behind

 

He kept telling me

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Baby I love you

No matter where we are

Or where we stand

We will always be together

Dont ever forget that

Ever

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The he pressed his lips to mine

For the first time

And then everything was ok

Then I closed my eyes

And slowly fell asleep

Laying with him

 

Like he once said to me...

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We will always be together

Author's Note

I just wrote this, its not like my other pieces of writing but I wanted to see what you think?

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

It actually is a lot like your other writing. Like everything else you write, you pour everything you are feeling into this piece. While the style may be different, the raw intensity of your writing is still the same. I do like the back and forth conversational style of this piece - it really smooths out the flow a lot.

[Tate Morgan]

Excellent

[Jason]

Sweet and touching. Like a breath of fresh air on a crisp cold day. I loved your attention to detail, and the sweet beauty that lies within this work of art. Another great peice!

[chris]

this is so sweet

[deeps]

I like this I tought it read well. Such wonderful emotion so well expressed here. Amaming write, very well written.

[Jess.]

I really like it...and love the different way you wrote it, from the guy to the girl. Very nice.
The emotions came across very well...so much that as I read I started feeling sad for the couple :(
Good piece!

[bubbles]

bountiful:) youre right its not like you're others but i really like it:) well dun

[ebur™]

once again, you write another beautiful poem that has so much emotion in it that really comes out to the readers. it flows really well and its nice to read. thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!