So Perfect

So Perfect

A Poem by Manda
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This is about how a girl and a guy are so perfect! They do everything right. He loves her so much! He means the world to her! There love is a happily ever after kind of love! =) Lasting forever!

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You are so perfect

You love me so much

I always think I have found the one

Who will love me

And treat me so well

The one who will be standing by my side

Until the day we die

The one that will hold me in their arms

And wipe away all the tears I may cry

The one who wont be afraid

To tell me how they feel inside

But most of all

They wouldnt be afraid to tell me

How much they love me

And how much I matter to them

I believe that you are the one for me

You believed in me

When nobody else did

You stood standing proud by my side

Being my knight in shining armor

I was the only one that mattered to you

But most of all

I was the one you loved

And I was never going to leave you

And that is how it would stay

Living happily ever after

So perfect

As one

© 2010 Manda


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This is good! Its nice to see happy poems. There arent many.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's nice to see this happiness-not many of your poems have it. I like this one.

Posted 15 Years Ago


that was nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


People aren't perfect, and no relationship is, but two people can be just right for each other.
you ought to have showed this one to your boyfriend, it's very sweet.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Beautiful poem. I feel the love.
They wont be the one to hide behind their lies : I think you should take out the word "their" Just hide behind lies.

Posted 15 Years Ago


God, You are one lucky girl to have a guy like that! I loved the poem. I especially liked the one line "And wipe away all the tears I may cry".

Posted 15 Years Ago


Aww! It must be a good bf, cause u have written a lot of good loooovvvvvvveeeeeee poetry l8ly! Great Work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww, so cute!
Deffinetly can feel the love in it!
It's written very well, and you expreseed your love for him wonderfuly!
I wish I had a guy like this....sigh...hopefully I'll find him someday :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow, this is wonderful!! It reminds me of my boyfriend, too :) I love it! Great job!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is wonderful, i like this, very well written and expressed.


Posted 15 Years Ago



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