Music

They pay the sound of their love. Together they are one. They move together, with the melody they play.

He grabs his guitar and starts to play

Music feeling the room

I watch him as he strokes the strings

He is in his only little world

When the music stops

He looks up from the guitar

And looks at me

Then he takes my hands in his

And strokes the guitar

The he places my hands on the silver wired strings

And starts to play again

Only this time its with me

We play together as one

The music beats to the sound of our love

When the music finally ends again

He removes his hands from mine

And looks into my deep hazel green eyes

We stay like this for a moment

And then....

He moves in to kiss me

Our lips meet

And the music we once played

Now played in hearts

Reviews

[Star Shyne]

Aww, so sweet. Loved it very much~ Love the last two lines. Great job

[PaperHearts]

This was really sweet! In my own personal life, music and love are so definitively intertwined, that it was really refreshing to read a piece which was exactly about that. This poem was full of passion and a kind of silent understanding, and I could certainly relate to the scene which you described.
There were a few grammatical mistakes, in the sense that you moved around a bit at the end from present to past tense. However, this was a really beautifully written, heartfelt write.
~PaperHearts

[.nicole.]

I love how from poem to poem the emotions can change so darastically, This one is so heartfelt and fell of love.

[Dakota]

i love your romantic side. it so beautiful

Good Job keep it up ;)

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

This is really sweet, so romantic. A lovely poem :)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

i really liked this piece
it had a combination of love and music
i thought it was very well done

Wow. I really like how this relates to music. It's such a part of my life that I could feel myself nodding along with this. It's really well written. :)

[Wolfe Greytome]

This is a GREAT piece. This is among the best I've seen you write thus far. WEll Done.

[Jess.]

Beautiful piece! =)

[Jason]

I agree with Kit Kat...I like this one the way it is. I love the use of music as a metaphor for the wonderful and beautiful song of their love. I can truly feel the flood of love when I read your work....yet another excellent work of art! :)

Jay