You Just Love Me

They fall in love with each other. They look into each others eyes and love one another with all their heart. Its a happy ever after once again

You opened me up

And showed my beauty to the world

You gave me your heart

And let me hold our love

You wiped away every tear I ever cried

You pushed away the fears of mine

My shadow hides away

For it is afraid to come out now

You hold me dearly

In your cozy, warm arms

I am so relaxed when I am with you

I am not afraid

And I only feel you on my body

The touch of your lips on mine

And your fingers as they run through my long blonde hair

You whisper into my ear

I love you baby

Then we stare into each others eyes

And slowly close our eyes

Dreaming of our life together

And falling in love

Living happily ever after

In love

And in harmony

Reviews

[Satellite Heart]

I like the flow. Nice Poem,

[Lisa Marie]

this is really good! i love your choice of words.

[Brandon]

Alot of emotion here. A piece that just makes you smile. Great job.

[Jason]

Blissful emotions...deeply captured through brilliance and creativety. Bravo, this is truly beautiful!

[*molly]

[Jess.]

"You pushed away the fears of mine" I really like that line!
This whole thing is beautiful!
I was awwing as I read along =)
Lovely piece!

[Wolfe Greytome]

Yet again, you amaze me with the skill you possess. Each time I read a new piece, you bring a stronger writing style. This is an absolutely wonderful piece with a smooth flow and fairly emotion laden wording.

[deeps]

This is wonderful, very well written as well.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

I think its your best yet.
It is so descriptive that i drew a picture on the computer screen.
Again, nice work.

[ebur™]

yet another great piece. expressive, and it made me feel happy throughout the whole read. and i like to feel happy! :) great job.