You Dont Care

He just left her. Left her there all alone with nowhere else to go. She was afraid... She had nothing left of him because he took everything. And he didnt give a damn

Fine just leave

What do you care

You dont care if I cry

Or how much pain I am in

You dont care if you break my f*****g heart

You just dont care

I am so sad now that your gone

I loved you with all my heart

But then you had to leave me here

All alone

Feeling all this fear

I am so damn cold...

There is nothing for me to hold

I have nothing left to hold on to

Not even the memories of you

Because you took them with you

When you left me here...

I wish you cared

I wish you would come back

And save me from all this misery

I dont like being here all alone

Its so dark, and cold

I have no where else to go

But here...

This is where you left me

Where you let me fall...

And this is where I would stay

Because you dont care where I am

And I hate you because you just dont give a damn

Reviews

[Dakota]

its a beatiful peom and sad at the same time. i felt so conected with you

[Jason]

Truly remarkable, the way you lace painful insight through the lines of your poetry. I can really feel the emotion throughout....From the fear of being alone, to the resentment toward the end. Excellent work again.

Jay

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

i loved it.
i appreciate you sending me read requests. I love reading your latest work (:

[blackcat]

lot of sad emotion. i love it.

[Satellite Heart]

I loved the explosions of emotion. The way I felt in this type of situation, I hated him for hurting me and then I loved him and felt bad for hating him and then we kissed and I hated him for leaving me after. he'd let me love him. I loved him for crying as he drived away and I hated him for not letting me have one last kiss. and now all i can do is miss him, my baby. but sorry about that long statement. Point being I know where your coming from. Great Write....!

[.nicole.]

Loved this piece! I can relate so well to everything you wrote. All the best poems are one that people can relate to. This is one of my favorites of yours that i have read. Keep sending me read requests. I will get to them as soon as I can. I can't wait to see what you write next!

[Star Shyne]

very sad, and i can feel the anger within the words. Fantastic write. Great job =)

[PaperHearts]

I could definitely relate to this piece! You expressed the emotions really well, and I liked the punchiness and desperation behind the anger. This poem made me think, and made me reflect back on the times I've felt like this, and I guess I realised that sometimes, you say that you'll be fine if they leave...that you don't care anymore...but fundamentally, the love you have for them always outweighs the hate.
A nice write,
~PaperHearts

[Alelei]

Wow. This is very well expressed. So sad. Great read :)

[Wolfe Greytome]

As always a wonderful piece. You have a deep well of emotion to draw from and your writing reflects that clearly.