You Lied

He promised but then went and hurt her. Everything he ever said was a lie!

You lied to me

And broke my f*****g heart

You promised you wouldnt go

That you wouldnt hurt me

Did you even mean it when you said I love you

Or did you lie about that too

You were the only one I gave my kisses too

You were the only one I shared my heart with

I trusted you so much

I believed every word you ever said

But I guess they were all lies..

You didnt mean anything you said

Because if you did I wouldnt be here

Wiping all these f*****g tears off my face

Right now I am in too much pain to hate you

But when I get over you

And stop missing you

When I handle this goodbye

Then you will wish you never fucked with me

And wish that you

Never lied

 

Reviews

[rachelintheOC]

First off, you clearly are in a lot of pain. Heartbreak sucks; however it's a great source for inspiration. Keep mining it. Use it and become a better writer from it. Look for some metaphors that describe your pain.

Second, correct one line "...to much pain" should read "too" but that's a minor correx.

Keep at it. Writing helps!

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

I love what you wrote here! it was blood gurgling just to read, i felt as if i felt you anger too . . . i love your work.

[bubbles]

really good. love the emotion. clear as a bell. well dun keep it up

[deeps]

Wow! So very heart breaking and full of raw emotion!
It's very well written and so well expressed I must say!

[Jess.]

Woah!
I totally can feel the emotion in this, anger and hurt pours out of it.
You wrote it very well, everything flows so smoothly.
The last three lines are my favorite. =)
Amazing write! I think it's my favorite piece from you so far.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Another excellent piece. While I absolutely LOVE your softer writes, this raw emotional style works for you and you write it very well.

[A]

This was a really emotional piece of writing. Hopefully everything will work itself out in the end. :(

The writing though, was amazing. Very, very nice work. @@