So Sick!

It wasnt working and she was so tired of fighting for something that no longer existed. It was obviously not going to work and it was just to much to fix... so she decided to end it and say goodbye

I am so sick of this

I cant take anymore crap from you

I dont even know why you are still here

We never get along

All we do is argue and fight

You are never there when I need you

What happened to our love

It seems that it has faided away

I am just so sick of fighting for something that no longer exists

I dont know why you just wont leave

Why we cant just say goodbye

It would end all this misery

I dont think we can fix this mess

Even if we tried...

Its just to much...

Arent you sick of all this

I mean it would make sense if you did

Since it is all your fault

I think its time to make a change

How bout we start with goodbye

 

Reviews

[bubbles]

well dun. it is good. u conveyed anger quite well. ceep it up.

[deeps]

I know these feelings here,
Very well expressed!

[Wolfe Greytome]

An interesting piece - full of anger and pain, but with a subtle undertone of remorse. Overall, I'd say well done - or at least it will be after correcting a few minor spelling errors.