A Jerk

He was a jerk...didnt want anything but sex. She wouldnt take it. He gave him a taste of his own medicine then just left...he was a jerk

Your a jerk

Did you know that

You played with me

Thought you could f**k and then move on

But I simply wouldnt let you

So you got mad

You bitched at me

And pushed me around

I didnt give a damn though

I decided to make fun

Made a game out of you

I tricked you

I got down with you and flirted hard

I made you think that I wanted you

I was dirty

When I got you where I wanted

I knocked you down

Pushed you around

Made you feel like the a*s that you are

Then I left you

I hated you

You jerk!

 

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

A harsh piece, but a good piece. You have a remarkable talent for writing pieces that contain a thinly veiled rage that is under tight control. But through it all, I feel that there is a softer side lurking just beneath the surface which will eventually rise above the anger and allow your work to shine on a whole other level.

[deeps]

I've known a few guys like that,
Wonderful vent write!

[Jess.]

Wow!
A poem about revenge, I like it!
I can certainly feel the anger in it, and I'm sorry if this is from a personal experience.
But, good piece of writing!