Just A Dream

A girl falls asleep crying... She doesnt realize that she is dreaming...and as she awakes the tears start to fall because what she thought was real was just a dream...and he was never coming back

Why did you have to go

Why did you have to say goodbye

Why did you leave me here alone

As I lay there crying

I fall asleep...

We are dancing in the hay fields

We take each others hands

Spinning around in a circle

Our eyes locked on each other

He stops us and the world too

He slowly makes his way closer to me

So his lips are only an inch away from mine

Then by surprise he kisses me

His lips warm

I feel a bright flame

.....

Then I awake

The flame was gone...

And the tears start to fall again

He really was never coming back

When he said goobye

He truly meant it

And what I thought was real

Turned out to only be

A dream...

Reviews

[Jess.]

I like this one also!
Very sad again, but very relatable....
Good write!

[deeps]

I can really feel this one alot, I have been here before!
This is so expressive and straight from the heart,
Very well written.