Missing You

A girl who misses what she loved most. She knows its over but nothing can change how she felt. She lives on being strong and just dreaming... Remembering what memories they had together... Its ok though.

I miss you so

I cant get you out of my head

I dream of you at night

I write little poems about you

All my songs about you

I cant forget about what we had

What we loved most

I mean how could I

You were my first

Never have a felt so wonderful

I wish we didnt have to say goodbye

But the flame we once felt

Burned out

And our love died

I wish it hadn't

But it did

And I guess Ill have to live with it

I really miss your hugs

I loved the warmth of your body on mine

And your kisses

I always loved the touch of your lips on mine

I miss cuddling with you

I was always comforted

I know its over

But Ill always love you

And Ill always miss you

I just hope....

You miss me

And love me too

Reviews

[deeps]

Oh how i know this feeling so mcuh!
So well expressed!

[Seeker]

Oh, I can relate to this so perfectly that it's staggering. Pointedly written, nothing hidden, for every meaning to be understood (unconscious rhyme, happens sometimes). Excellent work. Keep writing!