The Sunset

A scenery of a magnificent sunset. As they watch the colors paint the night sky. Bringing life to our world. Ending the day with beauty

The sun sets

And the colors begin to appear

A radiant yellow, orange and red

The colors paint the night sky

The sky warm

And shining joyfully

Its like a ball of fire

You can feel the heat of the earth on you

As you walk across the beach

You hear the waves crashing onto the shore

As the sun sets

Farther across the horizon

The earth starts to cool

And the wind starts to blow

The sky starts to darken

The colors slowly fading away

As for the sun...

It becomes dark

The earth becomes silent

And goes into a deep sleep....

Reviews

[A.Lee]

Wow, you painted a BEAUTIFUL picture with this piece. The imagery was fantastic. Sunset is my favorite time of the day. Its gorgeous and thought provoking... Everything feels calm and peaceful at that point in the day. You summed it up wonderfully. Lovely job.

[Silere]

Great job creating this imagery.. I loved the fact that I didn't even need the picture to see what you wanted us to see. Thank you for sharing!

[bubbles]

nicely dun. good description. i could see that in my mind

[A]

I love descriptive poems about nature, thus, I greatly enjoyed this. As always, very nice. xD

[deeps]

This is a very well written here,
Well expressed and stated!