The Sunset

A scenery of a magnificent sunset. As they watch the colors paint the night sky. Bringing life to our world. Ending the day with beauty

The sun sets

And the colors begin to appear

A radiant yellow, orange and red

The colors paint the night sky

The sky warm

And shining joyfully

Its like a ball of fire

You can feel the heat of the earth on you

As you walk across the beach

You hear the waves crashing onto the shore

As the sun sets

Farther across the horizon

The earth starts to cool

And the wind starts to blow

The sky starts to darken

The colors slowly fading away

As for the sun...

It becomes dark

The earth becomes silent

And goes into a deep sleep....

Reviews

[LynLee]

i like this......it gets the picture of a sunset perfectly in my mind......

I really love this, because the sunset is probably one of my fave things...I like it a lot

[lamia]

well written , it's my favourite time of the day , you described the beauty of the sunset

[Bear]

hahaha... oh, I'm just haha-ing due to me thinking ~the earth sleeps while I'm awake~ since I'm usually up in the wee hours and miss the moonlight when the clouds cover it's light.
FINE WRITE!! Sorry it took me a while to read!!

[rachielle]

Great use of imagery. You managed to capture the breathtaking feel of a sunset on the beach.:) Nicely done!

[JenLyn]

Very nice, it reminds me of my favorite time of day and favorite place. I love being on the beach during a gorgeous sunset. Very beautiful write!!! It's going in my library. Keep it up girly!!! 100/100

[Brandon]

Very calming piece. Great job!

[Alexis]

the imagery is bangin!
loooved itt...
i think you could do better tho...
think about it :)

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a very descriptive piece of writing. I can picture the sun setting behind the ocean as someone walks along the sandy shore quietly watching the end of a day.

[Wolfe Greytome]

This is a wonderfully descriptive piece. Well done!!!!!!