The Sunset

A scenery of a magnificent sunset. As they watch the colors paint the night sky. Bringing life to our world. Ending the day with beauty

The sun sets

And the colors begin to appear

A radiant yellow, orange and red

The colors paint the night sky

The sky warm

And shining joyfully

Its like a ball of fire

You can feel the heat of the earth on you

As you walk across the beach

You hear the waves crashing onto the shore

As the sun sets

Farther across the horizon

The earth starts to cool

And the wind starts to blow

The sky starts to darken

The colors slowly fading away

As for the sun...

It becomes dark

The earth becomes silent

And goes into a deep sleep....

Reviews

[Starting Over]

Beautiful! I love sunset and this was a great way to write them! Excellent work

[Dane Osborne]

This pome was more like an expression than a statement, which i can dig. It was very well written piece, well done.

[PaperHearts]

Interesting! It was definitely a lot different to what you normally write, but I kind of liked that! You created a beautiful scene, and evoked enchanting memories, and reading this reminded me of just how amazing a sunset can be. :)
~PaperHearts

[Tina Kline]

This creates a very beautiful scene with a lot of peacefulness to it.

[Soul Magic✯]

i really enjoyed reading this piece... very beautifully written.

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

beautiful, as always! :)

[rockinmiley555]

i really love how different this was for you. i also loved the imagery and memories it brought up! i cant remember the last time i watched a sun set.

[Luna Northstar]

A very beautiful and artistic piece, great job!

[Frantzuu]

very beautiful write, stunning!! :)

[Haifa]

I love sunset, and nice poem :)