The Sunset

A scenery of a magnificent sunset. As they watch the colors paint the night sky. Bringing life to our world. Ending the day with beauty

The sun sets

And the colors begin to appear

A radiant yellow, orange and red

The colors paint the night sky

The sky warm

And shining joyfully

Its like a ball of fire

You can feel the heat of the earth on you

As you walk across the beach

You hear the waves crashing onto the shore

As the sun sets

Farther across the horizon

The earth starts to cool

And the wind starts to blow

The sky starts to darken

The colors slowly fading away

As for the sun...

It becomes dark

The earth becomes silent

And goes into a deep sleep....

Reviews

[Satchmo's Gal]

FINALLY. After all the sorrowful poems I was reading while sifting through my read requests, I come upon a happy one. My mind is at rest. Great job.

[Chloe Christine]

This is so beautiful and relaxing to read.
Listening to screamo and reading this?
Not possible, I had to turn it off.

Beautiful

[MagiCrystal]

I like this ... so much

[SamBug]

I loved this a lot.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this. Sometimes I don't like nature poems, but this one was interesting. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Havatara]

It was great. However, I felt that most of the stanzas sounded like they should have been finished with something else. Maybe I was reading it wrong, but that's just how it felt to me. It was still an amazing poem.

[kbjami]

I love nature poems. I think this is a great nature poem

[Emily]

Beautiful piece. It is the talent of a good writer to be able to actually take something we see and make the reader see it when he/she reads our work.

Word choice is well done, and the colors you've portrayed are excellent. Nice work!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I enjoyed reading this awe inspiring portrait of nature.
This beautiful poem is quite relaxing. Great work capturing
the emotions of it all.

[Star Wolf]

You paint a very beautiful picture with your words.