Our Love

There love was so strong that nothing could pull them apart. Life was always full happiness and never sorrow. They had one another to get through with the past and make a future together.

Our love
Beats to the sound of our hearts
It has a melody of its own
We harmonize
For we sing and we dance
And love one another
Together were happy
And never are we sad
When we kiss its so sweet
Hugging so tightly
Not letting go of what we love most
Never have we loved like this before
So perfect and sincere
Nothing can be said or done
That could make us change our minds
About each other
Because we truly
Love one another

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

A very positive and romantic poem.

[Havatara]

So romantic! I loved it a lot, and I don't think you should change where the lines are at the end? Like have:
"Nothing can be said or done
That could make just change
our minds about each other
because we truly love
one another."
It's your choice, really, but I think it would be a bit better that way.

[hotbunny]

its very romantic

[Chloe Christine]

This is my favorite request of all. And that says alot, considering I have 44 read requests(:
This made me cry. To think of how I feel right now, along with the guy im with. Its truly amazing!

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

Very well written.
It has a nice flow to it.
Keep up the great work!

-Elissa :D

[Valentin]

Ah, love, you have great flow. Nice job, very... congenial.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

sweet poem. A fusion of two spirits.

[deeps]

I like this write, it's emotional and well said