I Have Let Myself

I Have Let Myself

A Poem by Manda

For the last 18 years...
I have let myself fall apart
And let what others say offend me

I have let myself suffer
And keep all the pain inside

I have let myself cry
But only when alone

I have let myself critisise 
The beauty that I cannot see

And still...
I have let myself agonize
On my constant failures

Instead of letting myself
Be Happy....

© 2012 Manda


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You are, and always have been, your own worst critic my dear. To those of us who read your work, your worth expands with every word. To see such skill put down by the person who wields it has always disappointed me somewhat - its great to see you finally taking a stand and sticking up for yourself (especially against yourself!). This is a wonderful piece that spreads a very relatable message and once again, your skill has not failed to impress.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manda

11 Years Ago

im glad you always enjoy my pieces of literature.



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You are, and always have been, your own worst critic my dear. To those of us who read your work, your worth expands with every word. To see such skill put down by the person who wields it has always disappointed me somewhat - its great to see you finally taking a stand and sticking up for yourself (especially against yourself!). This is a wonderful piece that spreads a very relatable message and once again, your skill has not failed to impress.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manda

11 Years Ago

im glad you always enjoy my pieces of literature.
Most of us can't see the good in our life. Easy to see the negative. I like the thoughts and the logical ending. We must see the good in our life and what we do. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


life is what you make it.
Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I wasn't always but when I hit puberty I became the worst kind of insecure person. I let what people do affect me too deeply and I worried too much about what people thought of me. I did and said some stupid things that I shouldn't have all because of one thing.
The anxiety was eating me alive!
But I eventually learned to let myself be happy and I hope you can too. (: thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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