speak

everyday i wonder this..i ask and like i say he tells what he only want to tell.

 

I wake up everyday thinking about him, i grab my phone and text him "hello im finaly awake". 10mins later he responce with, "finaly babe!" We say I love you to eachother...and talk about whatever is in our heads at the moment. Some go unanswered and some take awhile before he responces.

You think i should be happy right? think again please. did i mention "I" text him, "I" wake up thinking about him. what about him....?

i have no clue what goes on in that mind of his. he tells me only what he wants to tell me!

maybe i get an i love you, when i mention it first.

maybe i get a text back, when i text first.

does realy care if i even text him or say i love you at all?

hes the sweetest guy i have ever met in my life...what about the times when i dont do the talking, what will happen then?

I say..let your feelings out, or i will be out.

what do you say?

I love you babe...love me too?

Author's Note

ignore grammar...what do you think i should do?

Reviews

[Shellie]

In regards to the poem, it needs to be fixed up a bit, you should form it a little better, i'm not sure whether it would work better with rhyme. Maybe not as it sounds grand the way it is, only for the structure.