A Sacred Place

A Sacred Place

A Poem by Koibito "Nickie" Kitsuya

The trees dance
Like it is a joyous holiday
The wind touches my face
Like a mother's gentle hand
This is a peaceful place

The creek runs
So graceful, so passionate
And yet so alive
Like a child's mischievous mind
This place is a place of pure ecstasy

The birds sing
The crickets chirp
All these notes and rythmns
But no human voice
This is a utopian place

Nature,
I walk through
The forest in a state of awe
A place so beautiful
So precious

I sit down
And close my eyes
To listen, just to listen
Not with my ears alone
No, but with my heart too

The crickets chirp
The frogs croak
There is the rythmn
The birds begin to sing
There is the melody

The wind and the water harmonize
And everything blends
The wonders of nature
And the songs it sings
I fall into the music

I forget my problems
I forget my cares
I begin to relax
And I know I am at peace
This is my rest, my sacred rest

© 2011 Koibito "Nickie" Kitsuya


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This is like taking a walk through the enchanted forest. Beautiful imagery that brings to the mind as I read.

Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A soulful write. Very sacred indeed are those places...Bravo.............

Posted 11 Years Ago


You allowed us to listen to nature with YOUR heart and soul, Nickie. The imagery is exquisite here. The beauty of nature came alive when your ink was injected into it. Serene and peaceful! Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nature always serves as inspiration for writing poetry. I would love to be able to find a special place as you describe. It is what I imagine Heaven to be like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yes. I know this place.
We were created for the garden. It is where we find the rest for our souls. This is the place we will hear the songs our bodies were born to dance to and hear the music our voices were created to blend with.
Thank you for showing us the feel of natures embrace as your soul feels it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow I really need to get on here more often. Than you for the wonder comments I appreciate them.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely words you have penned Nickie...Enjoyed...Syberrose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it soooooo much!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Koibito "Nickie" Kitsuya
Koibito "Nickie" Kitsuya

Findlay, OH



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I am 28 years old and have five beautiful children. I have been writing poetry since I was five and writing stories since I was about eight years old. Some of my favorite authors are Stephen King, San.. more..

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