I'll Smile Again

I actually wrote this poem in the bus, I wasn't really in my happiest ... and those dark heavy clouds above me and the rainbow in the horizon gave me inspiration to write.

This dark heavy clouds that linger above me in turmoil

I can still see the rainbow in the horizon, beautiful, distinct and full of color

Brighter days lie ahead, as if to tell me

Beautiful moments that will make me smile again

Reviews

[Brittany Defranco]

Beautiful, I imagined a sky just like in the poem, hope to see more from you

[Malmalo]

Thank you Brittany

[Aslan Gerards]

Really nice, concise poem. I don't have any suggestions. Maybe play around with your commas in the second line, or change the first word to "These" or "Those" (it makes more grammatical sense.) Good job!

[Malmalo]

yep, I definitely should have used "these". Thanks