ipseity

ipseity

A Poem by Malvika

I hate it when people bombard there opinion and force their decisions on you.
It just disturbs the trail of thoughts and druthers of a person.
Sometimes it gets so agonizing that the person almost looses his true individuality and falls in a black hole where his self hood doesn't exist.

© 2017 Malvika


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This is the saddest thing one could experience. This is not something like a trauma, but a prolonged torture to one's soul. In the end, the tormented soul would either just disappear, leaving an empty body living mechanically, or hiding somewhere deep within and struggles with the torture forever.

The strong emotions carried in these lines trigger a lot of thoughts and memories. Don't be afraid to refine the lines if you have any thoughts to add in!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The strongest thing to do is stay undaunted and don't give consent to them. Never!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is the saddest thing one could experience. This is not something like a trauma, but a prolonged torture to one's soul. In the end, the tormented soul would either just disappear, leaving an empty body living mechanically, or hiding somewhere deep within and struggles with the torture forever.

The strong emotions carried in these lines trigger a lot of thoughts and memories. Don't be afraid to refine the lines if you have any thoughts to add in!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again, a lot of strong emotion here. Don't be afraid to play with it and do revisions.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Malvika

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your review:)

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Added on August 26, 2017
Last Updated on August 26, 2017
Tags: self, individuality, identity