Fear

A poem about a guy; heartbroken by the loss of a past lover. His mind is flooded with negative thoughts that not even he can understand or control.

Fear is my weakness, you are my strength, but you are also my fear, my dear. So you that bring me up with passionate doses of love and ever-lasting comfort, also bring me down to a time when I only experience anxiety and depression. I neglect the fact that I think I need you. My heart tells me one thing, my mind another. My thoughts sometimes seem to find themselves twisted and bundle together, creating a submarine full of negative scenarios that never seems to surface. My courage, confidence, and pride all wilted away like a flower past it's prime. You were my first true love and now you're my bestfriend, but our connection is still sparked. You weren't the first of a list of things, but you were the first to win my heart. Our time has passed, but could time be reveresed? Is my constant suffering fate or a painful curse? You are my downfall, but also my uprise. Your love is like Red Bull, it gives me the confidence and the wings to lift passed any obstacle I may face. I have the option and the power to forget, but still, my dear, loving you is a fear I will willingly never overcome.

Author's Note

Excuse any mistakes if any were made & I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Malik Rosser]

Thank you Micky. I really appreciate you're opinion. I will be uploading a lot more of my work soon. :)

[micky]

I like the layout as well as the scene you paint with your words...
Well done Malik:)