Alone with you

<3

I imagined the comfort of your arms would be like sinking into velvet

Breathing in your scent just to hold it in my lungs (I almost felt it)

Feeling your thick fingers running up and down my arms

Drowning you with love and suffocating you with charm

Your hair, messy and disheveled, can't hide your eyes and how they stare

because when you're looking at me... I can feel you everywhere

Our surface banter seemed all we had yet I craved a deeper connection

My times with you, though they were few, are memories in my collection

I think your touch would be soft, overwhelming but full of restraint)

(as tension spanned the length of your arm wrapped around me with no complaint)

From the taste of your neck... to how your breathing changes pace

I love the way the light just falls across your face

I think I could have you for a little while at least

I opened my eyes but the thought had not ceased

But you're only real inside of my head

Lively and vivid when I'm alone in bed. 

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was beautiful.
I love how romantic and meaningful it was.
The rhyming was also brilliant, seemed natural, not forced.
I think it was also very poetic.
All about imagination and dreams of the perfect man.
Just be patent though and onev day thewy will no longer be dreams.

[Twizzler]

Thank you for your sweet review :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

you are welcome :)

[UC Poika]

Wonderful poem. It couldn't be any better.

[Twizzler]

Thank you so much! :)

[Hector Tellez]

i loved the way you expressed the way you felt for this person

[Twizzler]

Thank you. I just sat down and started writing and this is what came out.

[00000000000000000000000..]

That was very pretty Malerie, nothing wrong with being a dreamer in a vision, I guess I am one to get sucked up in them like a vortex a lot times. I loved the write very much:)

[Everett DeValle]

Beautifully said and expressed so well. Excellent, Malerie. :)

[Twizzler]

Thank you so much

[Everett DeValle]

You're very welcome

[Wabbajack]

Sounds lovely, if a bit lonely. I think most people take the time to fantasize about those we wish to be with the most. Also I think I read somewhere that it's actually healthy. Anyway, I love it. :)

[Twizzler]

True. Thank you for reading and commenting :)

[MoriartyMesa]

This reminded me of a song, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pYkkgIdDKvQ

[Twizzler]

really? how so?