What it Feels Like to Lose

What it Feels Like to Lose

A Poem by Twizzler
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From August 2012

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I'll forget your lovely face and all the things you said

It hurts so much that I can't make myself get out of bed

I miss you still but there's nothing I can do

You made your choice, I miss your voice, but now its all on you.

I'm sick inside and so attached,

there goes "forever", it did not last

Why did you leave me? It all happened so fast

and what was supposed to be my future is now in the past...

© 2014 Twizzler


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I miss you still but there's nothing I can do

You made your choice, I miss your voice, but now its all on you.

nice rhyme and emotive thoughts. :) loved it.
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

:) Thank you so much! Appreciate you taking the time to read.



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Wow that hits hard. Real good stuff. Almost brought a tear to my eye.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was a nice poem. I could relate to this poem. Thank you. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome, Maya. Thank you for reading.
Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills. 


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

You're too kind :) Thank You.
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friend
I miss you still but there's nothing I can do

You made your choice, I miss your voice, but now its all on you.

nice rhyme and emotive thoughts. :) loved it.
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

:) Thank you so much! Appreciate you taking the time to read.
Gosh, your poem feels like my struggle against cigarettes lol...I know it meant something else. If you seem the other dude of the coin...it's a different picture but the same coin. ;)

Lovely emotions expressed well in your poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

LOL. I can see what you mean, I'm a smoker myself so I know what its like.
Everett DeValle

10 Years Ago

Lol it's like a love/hate relationship. I'm a non smoker now. It's a beautiful thing to be a non smo.. read more
Another profound write of depth:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

Appreciate the review, Jonathan.
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10 Years Ago

Your very welcome Malerie, I like reading you:)
I like this one. You can feel how much of herself she put into the relationship. How eaisly love can become hate. How often hope becomes aspirations.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

Very true. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

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Added on January 12, 2014
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Twizzler
Twizzler

Charleston, SC



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*I'm Malerie, obviously a writer. *I'm going to college with a major in jourmalism and a minor in psychology. *My hobbies/interests include: writing, reading,, makeup, interior decorating, study.. more..

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