OKAY

OKAY

A Poem by Twizzler

Okay....
So I smothered you- I'm too clingy and needy
Okay...
I'm too negative and I bring you down, sweetie
Okay...
My possessiveness is more than you can take
Okay...
I stress you out and you need a break
Okay...
So you took my life and totally wrecked it!
Okay...
I'm doing as good as can be expected
Okay...
So you're leaving and I'm letting you go
Okay...
It's the end, I just want you to know
Okay...
It's pathetic how I kept holding on
Okay...
I'll be fine as soon as you're gone. 

© 2013 Twizzler


Author's Note

Twizzler
This poem is short and to the point...not my best but just something that came to me one day.

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Difficult not to cling to someone that is part of you...I know both sides of that story.
Very, very well done..you have the poets touch..me on the other hand..as long as my words make some sense to me..I'll just throw them out there.
A well crafted write.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and posting such a sweet comment.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott....



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Wow! This poem hits really close to home for me. It reminds me of the feelings I felt/feel about a breakup with a friend. Good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
Difficult not to cling to someone that is part of you...I know both sides of that story.
Very, very well done..you have the poets touch..me on the other hand..as long as my words make some sense to me..I'll just throw them out there.
A well crafted write.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and posting such a sweet comment.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott....
Is about something that is trying to say

I confess without shame that I have the intention
to hijack your dreams
if no exceptions being the only invader

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your honesty is like a fire illuminating your heart and soul. Read through twice, feeling the pull of your thoughts on reflections of the past. Only bliss now for your new year, dear poet. xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twizzler

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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Added on December 23, 2013
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Tags: relationships, sad, moving on

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Twizzler
Twizzler

Charleston, SC



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*I'm Malerie, obviously a writer. *I'm going to college with a major in jourmalism and a minor in psychology. *My hobbies/interests include: writing, reading,, makeup, interior decorating, study.. more..

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