Watch Me Spill...

I'm questioning why you picked me at all

You hurt me in ways I don't wanna recall

Built up so high, I can only fall

And watch myself shake on this crumbling wall

Tried to keep it together, but I'm starting to crack

Yeah, I said "it", but I'm taking it back

I force myself to smile at you and hug you like I always do

Wanting badly to say "we're through" and hoping that you'll see it too

I wish somehow you could change my view...

Show me you care, but it's just not you

Don't wanna break it- don't wanna take it away

Don't wanna feel like you don't want me to stay

It's the reason I can't sleep at night

The skin I'm in that's just too tight

Eyes that shut to block out the light

And scars that numb and fade to white

It's the sad letter that I can't stop reading

The kitchen knife that keeps me bleeding

The emptiness that I can't fill

The feelings inside that never will

A liveliness that I can't kill

So cut me open and watch me spill....

Author's Note

This is also an older poem that I have come across, so let me know what you think.

Reviews

[wolf843]

Wow very depressing. I feel like I need a trip to the mental hospital now because the poem made me feel depressed. But i really like when people can make me feel with their writing... So good JOB!!!!!

[Twizzler]

Thank you for the review, sir. I hope your mental health is still in tact and you can manage in your day-to-day life.

[00000000000000000000000..]

I liked it, Its very deep spoken, But the end naw I could never do:)

[zainul]

It is a very passionate piece.
I understand you dedicated lots of your time to craft the rhymed work.
I congratulate you for the eloquent poem.

[Twizzler]

Thank you SO much for your kind words!

[zainul]

You are most welcome,creative poet.:)