...The Things I'll Never Say

This one was just a brief little poem I wrote one day on the spur of the moment.

Hug me
Kiss me
Love me
Miss me

Want me
Need me
Live me
Breathe me

Guide me
Protect me
Help me
Correct me

Watch me
Flaunt me
Hold me
Haunt me

Touch me
Feel me
Stalk me
Steal me

Chase me
Thrill me
Have me
Fill me

Trust me
Keep me
Take me

Complete me.

Reviews

[Caradoc]

Interesting piece.

There are a small handful of things I would add to your list, such as; Kill me, hurt me, hate me, and leave me.

As this work stands, it sounds as if the narrator has already fallen victim to two of my suggested additions. Either that or they are just too afraid to hope.

It is quite sad.

-Caradoc

[Twizzler]

Thank you for reading. It is interesting, although I kind of just thought it up quickly with the idea of all consuming love and need combined.

[Maya Garnes]

That was really nice. I like that :)

[Frieda P]

Doesn't leave much to say after that list, sounds like a rather lonely existence at best, good read though, I enjoyed it.

[Twizzler]

Thank you !

[Basu Gupta]

somewhat good..but while going through your previous poems i've seen a much much better writer in you..i'm not giving a bad remark but your previous poems made me expect a little more from you..and i know you're capable of that..
Just my opinion don't be affected by that..
Thanks for sharing..write more

[Twizzler]

Well, I appreciate your opinion. And yes, it kinda came to me so I wrote it....not necessarily as deep or though out as others.

[Basu Gupta]

don't mind me for that..
And you'll write many more which will be reflecting a lot..

[Relic]

It makes me wonder why you'll never say those things. Too independent? Lost someone? Abandoned and bitter? Whatever the reason, a interesting little write.

[Twizzler]

Thank you. (And the reason is that it makes you too vulnerable if you have to ask.)

[Relic]

I suppose it would depending on who the other person/persons are. A hug, a kiss and some love are never to much to ask of me. Personally speaking. :)

[annabellee]

Very intriguing poem. It has a very good flow.
Awsome, indeed ;)

[Twizzler]

Thank you very much for taking the time to read. :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Everett DeValle]

Awesome.

[Twizzler]

Thank you so much!

[Everett DeValle]

You are so very welcome.