Poems and Papercuts

xoxoxo from September/October 2009

Poems and Papercuts

I see us slowly drifting apart
losing your face and it breaks my heart
my mind is muddy with thoughts of you
Knowing there's nothing that I can do
I stretch out my hand
but its too far a reach
... Once upon a time,
I held on like a leech.
I wanna live in your arms
I wanna scream (out), "Don't leave"
Whats the worst part of love?....
its attempt to deceive.
To make you feel secure...
and then one day dissolve.
And leave you with problems that can't be resolved.
After all that you've done- I never got to choose
So just leave me the valentine with the bruise.
Spilling the pain through my pen
So wrecked...so wrong...never again.

Reviews

[Rayree Parker]

Good stuff thank-you...! so well put whats the worst part of love ..? its attempt to deceive .. u pretty much summed up a whole lot in 10 words .... love this site its like you peeped into how i am feeling and wrote it for me :) thats raw emotion truth right there at its finest and thats what makes incredible writing .... thank-you again

[Twizzler]

Thank you so much! Glad to know there are people connecting to what I'm feeling as well. It definitely makes it worthwhile to know I'm not alone and for others to know that they are not alone. I really appreciate your review!

[Rayree Parker]

yea.. why is that? it makes us feel a little better to know your not alone in feeling this heartache deep pain of the worst kind in my eyes .. that i wouldn't want anyone to have to go through yet it comforts me to see that a beautiful minded talented writer like yourself and others who share there real truths here are experiencing this horrible feeling.... camaraderie through terrible pain ..lol.... truly makes me feel comfortable.... enough to share my deepest vaulted wounds .. :) ...

[Rob Santana]

Full of emotion,had really good flow.

[Twizzler]

Glad to hear that. Thank you.

[sithlordjp]

Loved the title and everything that followed it! A very touching piece, liked the image of the leech, a very effective way to express this emotion. Well done!

[Twizzler]

Thank you so much! Your comment is much appreciated.