The Enemy

The Enemy

A Story by Mal
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The enemy has come. Would you face you fear? Or run away?

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The light from the lone streetlight, entering through the window, cast giant shadows on my bedroom wall.

I curled up under my blanket, staring out into the night.

That’s when I saw him �" The Enemy.

I did all I could to gobble the scream that was erupting from my throat.

Suddenly, I felt like all my systems have paralyzed. 

My instincts screamed at me to run out of the room, get out of the house and get help.

But no, how can I appear weak in front of him?

He stared at me with those creepy emotionless eyes.

Drops of perspiration trickled down my face.

I’ve heard that human mind is the fastest traveler. Today, I seemed to prove it as my mind went over the times I had encountered him and ran away screaming. I remember how he would follow me, always faster than me.

No, I didn’t stand a chance if it came to running.

I wanted to shut my eyes and pretend to be asleep. But that wouldn’t do much good. He already knows that I’m awake.

Moreover, I’ll be as silly as the stupid cats who think nobody sees them if their eyes are shut.

No, I WILL NOT appear weak and afraid.

And the past encounters have left me with a strong belief that he can smell my fear.

I looked him directly in the eye. I hope he got the message that I’m braver than he thought.
He made his first move.

He got in through the open window.

In a matter of seconds he’ll attack me.

I had only this matter of seconds to save my life.

I racked my brains for something, anything that would get me out of here in one piece.

Then it hit me.

Yes, the enemy is afraid of light.

I stood up, gathering all my courage.

The first thing in a battle is to NOT turn your back at your enemy. But today I have no choice.

I turned around, reaching for the switchboard.

It funny how I never get what I want when I’m in a hurry. I turned on all the switches.

The tube light and the bulb flickered to life together.

Yes, yes, yes! I did it.

I looked back to see my enemy take off through the window.

I almost cried with relief.

All those years in biology class paid off.

 I was right, cockroaches run away from bright light.

© 2012 Mal


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Sid
Haha, very nice. You had me going on visions of horrid monsters and what not, a cockroach was the last thing on my mind, I really like the ending...great work!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol this is great and i was expecting something else love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha i was anticipating the end when i was in the middle of the story!! You have described the emotions very well and also the surroundings. Good job!! You gotta check out my story 'wizened night' right after you get this review you will know why i am asking ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mal

11 Years Ago

Read your story wizened night..looks like this enemy is universal ;) lol
anxia

11 Years Ago

haha
A quirky and interesting story. I was sucked in from the beginning and i did not expect the sort of sweet way in which in ended. A great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mal

12 Years Ago

Thank you! :) I enjoy surprising people
Oh my... How clever!! Very good read and such an awesome ending, I had no idea, I thought it was like boogeyman or something.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mal

12 Years Ago

Thanks :) Actually, even I had a very good laugh after completing this one.

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