Humanity and the Beanstalk

My first poem that I actually decided to publish anywhere for people to see.

Humanity and the beanstalk

A stalk of green rises and rises, wouldn't you say?

Has been growing day by day!

There is not an end in sight and it gives us quite a fright!

There are only perches to ease our plight.

But I will tell you

The stalk has an end.

Falling off is quite a trend.

But one day we will reach the end!

And on the end is a pillowy cloud.

And we will feel quite proud!

It is not the end, no no!

Then we must climb another stalk,

Another of gilded chrome!

Author's Note

Just interested in what you think.

Reviews

[T]

I find it a bit humorous as well as imaginative for a first poem. You used the word end twice but no harm as far as rhyme goes. Not a bad poem at all.

[Malachite Rain]

Than you for taking the time to post a review. I hadn't expected it to be seen by anybody, but it looks like I was wrong. I'm rather new to poetry so it is encouraging I didn't flop immediately.
I noticed the repetition and realized it's quite jarring, thank you for pointing it out.
Yours are really good, too.
Thank you for taking the time to say something about it, very few people think it worth to do it on the internet, let alone in real life.

[T]

No problem.