Angel Among Us
A Book by Makenna
 They protect us, always, keeping the Darkness away, keeping us safe. They are the Guardians--the angels among us. Matthias was given one job--to protect Annalise. He failed. And now we're doomed.  © 2013 Makenna
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What do you think of my characters and the general idea of the story so far? Constructive criticism, please. Not just "This sucks" or "This is great!", more like "I like this: ________, but this could be better done: __________". If something is awkwardly written or just not good, please tell me so I can fix it.
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Added on November 5, 2013
Last Updated on November 5, 2013
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Makenna
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You don't need to know, but if you really want to--I like to write. I get ideas sometimes, they might be brilliant or they might suck. I think language is a way to create. Bring someone to a new world.. more..
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