What we could be.

Close your eyes.

Listen to the waves as they hit against the cold, hard, surface.

Feel the wind in your hair as it blows between us.

The separation between our bodies..
Would it be too bold if I erased that space?

 

Hear my breathing.

Listen to the sounds of my heart beat, racing towards you.

Total, utter, silence.

You can’t hear the sounds of love.

 

Two bodies. Two hearts.

Half empty, yet full enough that when brought together could form an extraordinary passion.

A passion strong enough to withhold any destruction.

A passion only the two of us could form together.

 

I could give you a reason to go on.

A reason to forget the past heartbreaks.

Won’t you give me a chance?

I could show you.

 

… Let me show you.

Reviews

[☯]

A compassionate and sweetly heartbreaking poem! It's warming that you wrote this for someone you see special, but also a little on the down side when you told us she would never see this poem. But, overall I truly adore and feel that this poem conveys both expressed feelings and chances. Great write!

[Tasha]

This was beautiful, it was compassionate and heartbreaking. You did a fantastic job!
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Coyote Poetry]

Every woman or girl like a poem of love and appreciation. I would share the kind words with her if I was you. A well written poem with kind and tender emotion. Words can open doors and life could be a surprise. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Make An Exception]

Thank you for the wonderful reviews :) :)
It's greatly appreciated. I greatly appreciate the positive feedback for my poem. It encourages me to write more :)

[A.E. Surdam]

Beautiful. The imagery was excellent and wonderful. Greatly enjoyed reading the beauty within your poem. :)

[Lily Mae]

Well at least you have shared how you feel and now it's up to her.. Just knowing that you love her in this way should be a gift in both friendship and love..x