You Save Me

As I see you lying there

I worry about loosing

You.

You’re my everything and

You’re the one that makes

My heart beat.

Having you gone would be like

Living in a maze. Not

Knowing where to go,

What to do,

What to say.

Constantly searching for a way

Back to your heart.

That is as delicate as a little flower.

Baby, when I’m ready

To fall. Ready to go.

You save me from the bottom.

Reviews

[BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown]

Those last lines are pretty powerful...

"When I'm ready to fall
you save me from the bottom"

It's like you recognize that falling in love is dangerous and that 'bottom' is that point where you are so lost in love that even the bliss of being there could become a scar.

I love this one! Good write!

[Jacqueline]

I like this poem.
The line breaks make it really interesting.
I also like how you kept the words capitalized even if they were part of another sentence.
:D
Good work!