Black Snake

Ah!

Is there a sound to express this feeling
I try to run away
I try to free myself
I try to hide
Why must you?
You!
Wrap your claws around my heart
Is this why my heart aches
When we're apart
I'm so confused
Stop this!
Please?
I'm scared!
Can't you see what this is doing to me?!
My skin is constantly on fire!
My heart
Oh my heart..!
She is being choked by this black snake
My mind feels as if I drunk moonshine
The moon shines
My tongue is on repeat
I hate this!
I love this!
I love you?
Why are you doing this to me?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You took me on a wild ride with this poem. I like the use of the black snake to make your point. I did like the strong ending.
"I hate this!
I love this!
I love you?
Why are you doing this to me?"
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Kuhr Gred]

haha.. makes me surprise anyway! XD i like it.. just like your running from a venom snake.. haha :D.. thanks for sharing
- kuhr Gred

[Southern Cross]

Beware of the sting of the snake..nothing sweet about it's venom..good read

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

definitely an emotional roller coaster. Ah what love does to us. Excellent

[Sleeping Maiden]

Ooohh i really love the emotions in this. It's like a rollercoaster! It all clashes together. i love it! Well done!

[Khal Attero]

Come to think of it, that you actually said once, that you're an amateur. This is far beyond than beautiful. You my friend are a true Writer. Respect man.