Destruction

Pain
That's all I've known in my life
Days of people staring
What have I done D
o you dine on my despair-
Drink my tears-
Encourage my hate -
Why are you so-
Hateful -
Stabbing me -
Cutting me-
Stop -
But you still go-
Everlasting is the hurt-
You give to me-
On my doorstep-
Idiots-
All I see are idiots-
Laughing immensely-
It isn't normal my hate -
I have for you -
You mock me -
They say it's a sin to kill a mockingbird-
But your killing me-
Will you enter the gates-
I see the gleam in your eyes-
Your mouth watering-
So this is want you want-
Huh!
My destruction-
Are you happy?

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

This is a really raw breakthrough of your emotions. All the anger, sorrow, despair, and various other destructive emotions are splattered all over this poem. This is a really fantastic and amazing piece; keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry. You have emotion, disappointment and struggle. I had to read this poem again for the strength of purpose and powerful statements. We can be pushed into corners where only option is to fight and destroy. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote