My heart and me

My heart and me

A Poem by Maila
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You are not alone even if your heart's broken, at least it's still within you.

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I can't be reassured tonight,
I can't be calm this time,
The stabbing that I feel is something so unreal,
Like twin daggers through my heart,
Slicing it into halves.
Is it a deal so big?
To have you out of my mind?
It's your presence that kills and your absence that heals.
For there is no 'you' in my 'we'
It's just my heart and me.

© 2012 Maila


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Maila
My first poem here, your reviews are appreciated!

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This was amazing and to only be your first poem...wow. Such a beautiful write, please continue writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Maila

12 Years Ago

It's not my first poem, just my first one on writers cafe:) Thanks for reading!
 Tasha

12 Years Ago

You're welcome, I still thought it was amazing! :)
Oh my, this is lovely. It has a beautiful flow to it and I adore the choice of words. You did a great job with this. I can't wait to read more of your work as it's posted. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Maila

12 Years Ago

thanks, your are really cool :D Appreciate your words, really motivated me!
Kelsey

12 Years Ago

Glad I could do so, lovely. :)

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Added on October 31, 2012
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Just stepped into my twenties, have lots of hobbies and interests, reading and writing being the foremost. Only recently did I take poetry writing seriously as something I want to do for a long ti.. more..

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A Poem by Maila