Sitting in the Rain

This was the short story I wrote to day in English :D I think it came out nicely X3

~*Sitting in the rain*~

     To me the rain feels like tiny little kisses as they fall one by one on the bear skin of my arms and face. Like sweet embraces that seem to leave a scene of compassion as each tiny drop rolls of my skin. Sitting on the forest floor my, asylum. I lift my face looking to the sky and let the rain’s kisses touch my still florid face. It feels so nice and refreshing on my hackneyed body. Just sitting here and letting it wash away all of my worries, all of the exasperation that fills my self. Leaving behind a new Nonchalant, and precocious me. The rain enhances my adulation of my actions today. I can only hope that I was not impetuous with my intrepid approach. Buy yet I can’t help but celebrate in jubilation in the rain, for he said yes!

Author's Note

What do you think?????

Reviews

[Hibah Shabkhez]

hackneyed body???

[Kalynn Bangs]

lol the vocabulary words can be confusing :P I rely love the rain X3 I guess you could say I have a connection with the rain... lol

[Holiday Sparkle]

I like this a lot. I love very descriptive writing. It makes me happy when I read this.

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

Do you live in the Sahara? Lol...jk. such desperation for rain...anyway; it did come out nice.

[Karli]

This was beautiful!:)

[Ashley]

Sam stole my words for this! D:
But in other words, I did get confused and I thought is was well worded and I'm gonna go look these words up :)

[shedevil]

this peice was extra girl loved it

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

So cute! The wording was perfect for the feeling you portrayed. I love this story.

[Sam]

I think this is adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The detail was really really good. I seriously felt like I was watching all this happen. (To be honest, the vocab confused me a little, just cuz I didn't know what it meant! Keep it up!)