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Untitled.

A Poem by Rose Tyler

I dream of you,
From what I remember.

I think of you,
From what I feel.

I miss you,
From everything I love about you. 

© 2010 Rose Tyler


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Rose Tyler
Dedicated to one person.
You know who you are.

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Interesting. The "from"s beginning each 2nd line make it seem as if the action taken in the second line is taken "from" the amount of material in the first.
In other words, you are dreaming of part of what you remember, you are thinking of part of what you feel, and missing part of what you love.
It was an interesting way to phrase it, even if this isn't how it was intended to come across. I thought it was interesting. :)
Also, it was concise and to the point, which i always appreciate.
Nice job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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