White Night

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Snow storm rages

From the endless white

Steps the black wolf and his mate

The world so white

There is no darkness

Not even the moon

Dares show his face tonight

Black and white

Psycho and sane

Two separate entities

Polar opposites

Yet neither can break away

The hunt is scarce

Neither a rabbit nor doe

Moose or mouse

None dare show

Shelter is what they seek

And behold a cave appeared

Settling down for the night

The wolf and his mate

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[A Taste Of Blood]

excellent indeed though i must say sanity and insanity are one and the same, revolutionaries were all claimed insane while their ideas were the very sanest they could possibly be. for example many believe karl marx was insane yet if you read the communist manifesto you will see his utopia is exactly that a perfect world, it was the interpretations of the soviet union, china, and north korea that messed things up for the whole idea. holy freakin history lesson lmao ^^

[Chaos Complex]

I love the imagery in my head your writing gives me. At the same time, I think this piece is very metaphorical and is a great piece! You've got a lot of talent and creativity. Keep writing and sharing this good stuff with me. :)

[Ashimoto]

I like wolf poems. Them and vampires stories. Lol. As you can see I'm a twilight fan. I am eager to see more of your poems.

[Mike O'Sean]

Very masterfully told. Again I feel the aura of a lacking rhythm. The story within can hold up without that though. Your choices of words give the poem much more depth than the average narrative verse.