Lost

I'm confused..

She knows its wrong

She knows it unsafe

She writes the next song

Yet with him she feels safe

They started as friends

Didnt even know who each other were

Now she amends

Next sound is a purr

Head over heels

Stumbling, tripping around her lovers

She dares not reaveal

Hoping she recovers

With one hand on his heart

And the other in his hand

Will she continually rip hersef apart

Each left on her heart a brand

Her heart says to let go

But her mind says its too soon

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

I can relate to this very well. It reminded of me how I told my first boyfriend that we need to take some time off.

[godmandistfu]

You are really good.
This was really deep.
I got a good picture of it.
How long have you been writing?

[Ashimoto]

That was very deep. What a great poem.

[Amaunet]

powerful words, and easy to relate to the situation. i think that we've all had the situation of loving someone and not wanting to loose them, willing to do anything to prevent that, and yet knowing that we should and hoping we get over the pain the seperation will cause us