Schnee

Winterlove

Wüstes Treiben
Sanftes Scheinen
Brauner Matsch
Weiße Pracht
Kalt
und doch so warm
Lebenselexier
von weiß bis gelb
bis grau bis schwarz
Einzigartig, jede Flocke
ganz für sich
und doch
nichts ist
für
     dich
oder
     mich
sanfter, schmerzhafter
Tod
      dieser
                Schnee

Reviews

[Mai]

Thank you, Lina Grey!

And aww, German is very hard to learn ... I'm actually from Germany, so it's easy for me , haha.

But what you wrote at the end is right =)
Well done and keep it up with the good work =)

[Lina Grey]

I'll be honest, I don't understand this word for word (I'm only just starting to relearn German this year, not very good at all :P) but from what i get this is a beautiful poem. A rainbow of concepts about snow ending on such a melancholy note. Ich liebe es (i feel like that's wrong...I meant to say that I love it)... :)