I  miss you

I miss you

A Poem by Mai
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Very personal, like ... the most personal I've written until now, I was a little 9 year old girl, when I first was confronted with the death of a very close member. Opi, ich liebe dich.

"
It's been 9 years
since I last saw you.
It's been 9 years
since I last kissed.
It's been 9 years
since I last hugged you.
It's been 9 years
9 long years
since I last watched you.
It's been 9 years
since I last talked to you.
It's been 9 years
since I last saw you sleep.
 The Endless Sleep
started
      9
         long
                years
                         ago
  for you.

I Miss You.
I Still Love You.
So Much.


Dein kleines Mädchen ist nicht mehr klein. Und sie hofft, dass du stolz sein kannst.
Dein Ströppchen

© 2012 Mai


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a beautiful tribute to your grandfather. I like the repition of time passing. They say time heals all wounds, but such is not always the case, and such does not mean that scars, good or bad, are not left behind. It's important to remember the ones we cherish, and I think you've done a great job with that :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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a beautiful tribute to your grandfather. I like the repition of time passing. They say time heals all wounds, but such is not always the case, and such does not mean that scars, good or bad, are not left behind. It's important to remember the ones we cherish, and I think you've done a great job with that :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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