Everyday We Celebrate

Everyday We Celebrate

A Poem by Mahi sain(Mahesh)

The whole year through,
Everyday is special,
Everyday we can celebrate
Not to mention
Only if we learn
Not to take tension
and make small thing
Worth celebrateing
That will help us Feel liberating
as one day of festival is good and actually fulfiling
But celebrate we should everyday
Life will be wonderful
And everyday will become healing,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thank you so much,
Wish you all happy happy new year,

© 2015 Mahi sain(Mahesh)


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Well new year has been passed days ago...and waiting for the upcoming!! Thanks for wishing☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


A clearly stated poem - simple and sweet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The poem is good. I think that it can be made better. A great thought. An enjoyable write.
Keep writing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Happy New Year.... nice poem...needs some editing though... but no issues, keep writing and keep improving.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Thank u sir,
and sorry,
next time I will try to give u best,
happy new year,read more
CA Anurag Sharma

8 Years Ago

No issues Sir...keep writing and keep improving...Happy New Year..May the coming year brings in lots.. read more
nice one,..but you need to be careful about grammar..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Thank u for ur review,
I am only hindi poem writer,
but i will trying to give next ti.. read more
Very nice poem...A sort of short and sweet type.....Happy New Year to you too.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review,
happy new year again,

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Added on December 30, 2015
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