Key Of Success,

Key Of Success,

A Poem by Mahi sain(Mahesh)
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Nothing to say, only do it

"
Read but write more,
Talk but think more,
Play but Read more,
I promise that you will be success sure,

Eat but chew more,
Weep but laugh more,
Sleep but work more,
I promise that you will be healthy sure,

Forbade but agree more,
Order but obey more,
Hate but love more,
I promise that you will learn to love sure,
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Thank you,

© 2015 Mahi sain(Mahesh)


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Short and sweet... a very niece piece of work... keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Thank you sir for your review.
Happy new year
Really nice poem and great work.It reveals the truth...Keep it up..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review,
Great work once again, however make sure to be considerate of the grammar. .

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review,
next time i will try to best result
thanks again
success....health and love..3 main pillars of life...good way of valuing them...liked it...keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Thank you bro.
for review,
without love,success,healthy no one can enjoy life properly.. read more
Knight Writer

8 Years Ago

always welcome brother
Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Its my pleasure brother
I like the last stanza..
Good write-up...thankyou for sharing..keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Thank you bro.
for review,

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Added on December 26, 2015
Last Updated on December 29, 2015
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