Move

When I realized she moved me.

The heartbeat of the goddess drops To guide her steps and sway I hold my breath as if time stops And cannot look away I stare, entreating My heart beating As if it were to say Behold her in her purest form And brave the storm today

Reviews

[Michelle De Jesus]

Very Nice, I like the way you use rhyme
In love much?

[Magrashon]

Thank you Michelle! Rhymes remind me of my childhood...when I was kidnapped by a leprechaun. But they are indeed nostalgic. And once I realized a poem with some music could be a song I haven't been able to stop myself. So thank you! And yes. In love very much. :)

[Michelle De Jesus]

you were kidnaped by a fairyyy!??? omg fregginngg awesome!!!!!

[Magrashon]

You'd think it would be. He just made me trim his beard and count his gold--of which I was given none. He did make exceptional scones, however, so I didn't complain.

[Michelle De Jesus]

:) that musted been interestingg

[Magrashon]

Yeah. No denying it. ;)

[Michelle De Jesus]

very nice!, in love much?