Indescribable

Can’t feel my fingers type out the words that are forming at my mouth

My thoughts are bonded down by the clawing pain inside my eyes

The sound track to my broken heart is burned out

Mute to every radio station around town

Can’t surrender to what I found inside my closet

A part of me scared, a part of me missing

Searching without a flash light to guide me out of this disappointing decision   

Signing my carbon foot prints as the water thickens beneath me

My breathing loses hope after the count of three, listen

Swallowing guilt and shame as death inhales happiness

A whisper squeezes out a drop of mercy like a pimple

Walks out on my tears without a glance backwards like a man

Can’t control the pain pumping through my lungs

These letters eat at my trembling lip

Plucking at the seven layers of skin I tripped in

Save my paper cut love before it knifed out of my soul  

Glue back my bleeding wrists before an infection oozes     

In a pitiful lullaby let me drown

Before death tattoos a black and an unnourished rose on my eyeslids

Can’t touch the voices that morn for exposures

That needs to breathe for a piece of closure  

A shoulder to take a leap of faith

I’m lost along the thin lines of depression

Writing inside denial exceptions

Cold disagreements waver it intermission

Love is nail down into the cerement of tension   

Facing a grip of emotions that cycles inside your  comprehension

Author's Note

Thank you for reading my friends! Tell me what you liked?

Much love

Reviews

[Lalli]

Today, i decided to revisit an old site. A place where I once looked forward to coming everyday and sharing in the creativity and expression of others. Today, I read a woman's poetry with a greater understanding then most. A woman who has grown stronger every day with each step since I met her years ago.

Anna, I'm glad to see your still writing. As always there are lines in here that have me sayin.. "wow" lil anna came up with that?! hahahaha... I'm thankful your still a part of my life,

lines i liked :
"Before death tattoos a black and an unnourished rose on my eyeslids"

"Signing my carbon foot prints as the water thickens beneath me
My breathing loses hope after the count of three, listen "

"Save my paper cut love before it knifed out of my soul
Glue back my bleeding wrists before an infection oozes "

much love n' respect

-Lalli

[Eagle Cruagh]

"These letters eat at my trembling lip".
A very original and visual experience, love it .
Your writing has grown with your stature.
Great stuff !
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Ahmad Alhour]

It's a self-conscious experience. I like it though it seemed a little bit vage at the beginning, but then some light came in ;) I dunno from where :P lol

Nice work, I enjoyed it.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I haven't heard you so descriptive! Very poetic and full of adjectives. I'm having a hard time finding which emotions you're conveying because it's so descriptive(does that make sense?)

"Save my paper cut love before it knifed out of my soul
Glue back my bleeding wrists before an infection oozes
In a pitiful lullaby let me drown"

Very well written. It's hard to lock your style down because every poem seems to be different. This piece is very strong and very polished and mature! I definitely see growth in your writing!