The beginning to an end

 

 

I’m going attempt my one night kiss     

Because when my suitcase touches down and my eyes travel below your navel

I’ll winkle a smile and give you another kiss to last forever

Attempt my newly seductive tone along your copper toned muscles   

Because when my mind launches an idea, you’ll never be able to change it…

Even if you possess my soul when the full moon lingers or

Comb my champaign curls around your fingers

I’ll still want to attempt you away from the heart I carry

   And then…….

         I want to

 

Envision our first love scene in these sheets

Breeching an unbreakable attraction 

Cheating temptation by a midnight kiss

Our bodies will intertwine in a chapter of passion

Under the candle lights we will surrender only to each other

Speak an untamed language that flirt’s love

   And then…….

         I want to

 

Attempt to flutter my eyes open

Because when you undress me with your eyes and butter me with your mind

I’ll giggle with joy and give away another kiss to last a lifetime

Attempt to slip my silk dress off and embrace my hips along your warmth

Because when my body shivers weakly, you’ll forever be my first

Even if you push my hunger to the edge of confession or

Kiss away the wrinkles that peals at my skin

I’ll still want to attempt you away from the heart I carry

   And then…….

         I want to

 

Envision our first love scene in these sheets

Breeching an unbreakable attraction and

Cheat temptation by the thrown of a rose stem

Our bodies will intertwine in a vine of make believe

Under the candle lights we will surrender to no secrets

Speak an untamed language that whisper the beginning to our end  

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy this. i haven't been able to write in a long time...tell me what you think, thanks

Reviews

[a]

Truly wonderful! The most passionate, breathtaking and truthful love poem, the poem about/for the act of love, I've read here so far.
The character is confident, passionate, expressive, powerful, saducive, yet somehow a bit confused, frightened, maybe?, but lust grows with every line, the magical sense of their aboslute divine isolation, detachemnt from the rest of the world, simple, yet very complex and moving. The poem has its own strenght, its voice, it brings shivers tio the body, its scary and enticing. Inocently seductive!
Third stanza is the summit, the zenith, that brought me to realize, how deep the emotions really are, how frustrating, yet fulfilling. The two sides of the whole.

Thank you very much!

[Gheeneil]

This seems to me a pure and strong physical desire and nothing more. It's just a sudden whimsical thought with no strings attached. Say, a one night stand. Thanks for sharing this.

[the nothing]

exelent a bit long but the best I've read yet an exelent story line perfect

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Wonderfully romantic and sensual at the same time! I love the repeated "I want to....."
very rhythmic and sultry! It adds to the sexual and romantic playfulness of the piece!

"And then��.
I want to

Attempt to flutter my eyes open
Because when you undress me with your eyes and butter me with your mind
I'll giggle with joy and give away another kiss to last a lifetime"

This is one of the first pieces of yours that I think would be a great spoken word piece! It can play very loving and very sexy at the same time! Great pen Anna!

[These Haunted Hallways]

Anna, this is like ur best piece ever! Incredible detail and imagery uve put into this piece! I love the beautiful colors u put in it, too. I agree with Arthur as well. Wonderful words from the heart and soul. I hope everything works out alright b/w the both of u, too :) Excellent job!

B.A.