Dissonant
A Book by Magnolia Liberato
If you were to succumb to your darkest desires and depression, would you slowly begin to lose yourself? Would your world start to crumble around you? Or maybe just your mind and your humanity?
© 2013 Magnolia Liberato
Author's Note
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I like being descriptive, but I need to know if I'm beginning to venture into the land of being "too wordy". I also need to know if the dialogue sounds too forced, or if it's natural enough. Any critique on any aspect of the book is welcome, however.
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Author
Magnolia LiberatoFort Walton Beach, FL
About
I'm semi-new to writing stories and novels. My creative outlet is usually music and lyrics, but as a small child I was very much into writing, and I'm trying to get back into it. I've just started my .. more..
Writing
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