Who am I?

Who am I?

A Poem by Alvin Williard Aspuria Aquino
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I am who I am

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As I open the camera
Light develops in camara
pixel, voxel, muscle, puzzle
here I am, but just a bubble

As I compose and I opus
Locus focus brings bright bogus
Vision's divisions, ambitions
but my mission is redemption

Dimensional suspended
to delusional cemented
Who am I to follow hollow?
I'll row vessel that I borrow

A stare eye to eye with the lies
I bare mind to mind to defy
to know I am in every days
freedom is inside-out at maze

To hold and tame the burn of fire
Unplugged to the program and wire
Enlight shadow reality
My reflections with clarity

A balance to walk in tight-rope
Discipline in thug-o-war probe
I will stand tall and will not kneel
I am who I am, love to feel

© 2013 Alvin Williard Aspuria Aquino


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I had a hard time with this one... The tongue twister of a write.... and the rhyme scheme... I do have a question able your first two line:

As I open the camera
Light develops in camara???

Câmara (meaning "chamber") is a common surname in the Portuguese language.

As I open the camera
Light develops in panorama

Sounds much better... If I have to read and understand Portuguese... to get this one... I'm going to have to be a linguist of sort...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alvin Williard Aspuria Aquino

11 Years Ago

I agree that panorama is good but I write every line with 8 syllable rules.

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Alvin Williard Aspuria Aquino
Alvin Williard Aspuria Aquino

San Jose, CA



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Alvin Williard A. Aquino is a visionary poetic philosopher who writes to discover some of the most important questions in the world. Alvin is a freelance writer who's written works have been publis.. more..

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